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Insurmountable

Life is a brick wall,a lump of concrete,heavy like leadand black as stormcloudscasting shadows on gravid skies.Each brick is a problem,a barrier. Blocking warmthfrom the feeble sunso roses die and...

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"Life is a brick wall"a familiar sentiment there, suzanne ...this is a powerful piece of writing ... life is a series of obstacles to be overcome .. we can only hope for that something that breaks...

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Thanks Beth I've been coming up against a few brick walls lately. I should take your advice and come in here more often. Step into Suzie's Sanctuary

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all that is left,...is dust.I loved the way this piece builds and builds until the dramatic finality of this ending.. I believe that love is what can crash through the wall of life.. I really enjoyed...

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I too loved the way this piece builds and builds until the dramatic finality of this ending. WoW good writing!

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Kazoom, that's some real heavy stuff there....and I sure don't mean that in a bad way...Life hits us all hard once in a while, and this poem really sums that up. Great one!GaladrielTo transform the...

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Thank you Colin, love is stronger than we know. Thank-you Sharran and Galadrial It was a vent, I wrote it after a particularly bad week.Step into Suzie's Sanctuary

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